Snaking his way through the forest of tourists gaping at towering concrete behemoths, he sighted his prey. Struck lightning fast. And slithered away with his prize, his victim momentarily unaware of his bite.
In response to this weekend's Trifextra writing challenge - write a 33-word response using the name of an animal as a verb.
Slithering serpents! I like this one---ouch!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great use of the prompt. The descriptive words are perfect to tell this story!
ReplyDeleteNever saw it coming - proof of a great attack.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteYikes! That was unexpected! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteNicely done! I really like the phrase "Urban Serpent." It summons up a very specific image of the character.
ReplyDelete"his victim momentarily unaware of his bite" ... Nice.
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