Saturday, August 4, 2012

Marina


As the car sank, he felt her powerful tail moving beside him as she held his head above the river's surface. “What are you?”, he gasped. She whispered, “Guardian of drivers who text.”


In response to this weekends Trifextra writing challenge for an original fable in exactly 33 words. 
http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/

14 comments:

  1. Oh good one! He was lucky, most are not.

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  2. Ahhh. An anti-fable perhaps? Nice.

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  3. This was perfect. Does she also help compulsive bloggers?

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  4. Oooh. The lady or the tiger. I'd say that this driver got both.

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  5. Very clever, indeed! Would that all could pay it heed.

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  6. Oh this was great. Definitely a fable for current times.

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  7. Timely, considering the cliff guy.

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  8. A different kind f guardian angel. Thank goodness someone is keeping that naughty guy from hurting anyone including himself!

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  9. Send it in to your local watchdog!

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  10. Oh so sweet, thank god there are angels for that! They are most needed...

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